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Little Snowbirds

Pink-toed hopping birds, like barefoot laughing children, play in a snow bank.

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Skat A

Date: 6/5/2016 8:56:00 PM

Darlene, nice haiku. SKAT

Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/6/2016 10:02:00 AM

Thank you, Skat, and I enjoy reading your poems as well.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/10/2016 8:35:00 PM

Delightful :-)

Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/12/2016 11:19:00 PM

Yes I do ! I love writing them and reading those of others too. Thanks for sharing Darlene.

Darlene Gifford
Date: 4/12/2016 7:35:00 PM

Thanks, I see you like haikus too.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/31/2016 7:14:00 AM

You painted a picture with wonderful images. Loved it!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 1/31/2016 12:00:00 PM

snow play is fun at any age! I'm happy you enjoyed this poem.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 1/14/2016 12:08:00 PM

Amazing imagery. Lovely writing!

Darlene Gifford
Date: 1/14/2016 12:41:00 PM

Thanks, for commenting. I wrote this early January last year.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/5/2016 4:47:00 PM

Wow love this, a picture in words, brilliant..happy hew year

Darlene Gifford
Date: 1/6/2016 12:15:00 PM

Thanks, harry, and may the new year bring blessings to you. Winter brings amazing sights which I will continue to capture in a poem. You might also like my "Winter" poem that I wrote. Now I'll go read some of your poems.~~~~Darlene

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/5/2016 7:46:00 AM

Lovely. I'm a sucker for a good Haiku, Darlene. Very dainty. Viv x

Darlene Gifford
Date: 1/6/2016 12:23:00 PM

Thank, Viv! I was thinking about birds. Do their feet get cold in the winter? And came up with this poem. Their toes may actually be orange, but heck, it's my poem! Thanks for liking it.~~~Darlene