Shane Cooper Poet Footle

Little Red

 
Red hood
Girl good
 
Nan ill
No pill
 
Mum dumb
No chum
 
Wolf bad
Bit mad
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Wolf munch
Nan lunch
 
Wolf chew
Red too

Huntsman
Has plan
 
Wolf snip
Unzip
 
Red free
Whoopee 
 
Nan out
Big shout
 
Wolf dead
Behead

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Michelle Mac Donald January 25, 2015 at 10:52 AM Clever footie, Shane. You've alot of imagination and talent to rewrite these, yet to still follow through with the storyline. Keep well and stay happy, Mikki Shane Cooper January 25, 2015 at 3:44 PM Thanks Mikki, I appreciate your comments. Thanks for stopping by Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2015 at 5:11 AM - Great footle, Shane .... well done :) - // Anne-Lise :) Shane Cooper January 19, 2015 at 5:17 AM Thanks Anne-Lise, I really enjoy rewriting nursery rhymes in this form. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison January 19, 2015 at 1:26 AM lovely string of footles Shane you told a great story:-) hugs jan xx Shane Cooper January 19, 2015 at 1:33 AM Thanks Jan, I just love these stories but I think the wolf is getting a pretty hard time of it. So far he has been boiled in one and unzipped in another. I think I might have to find a new protagonist. Love Shane xxx