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Little Pigeon River

Little Pigeon River Little Pigeon River’s water lullaby, the flow’s soft percussion against mossy green rounded river rocks, multi-layered, contrapuntal, a faint hiss, tiny scrapings as small stones are settled into place by the cold current, my eyes heavy, sleep waiting nearby.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/27/2013 7:26:00 AM

Very serene, I have a water feature outside my window and the sound of the water falling on the rocks is very soothing. I too love the ocean, we live close to lake Okanagan and it surfices as a surrogate ocean.

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/27/2013 7:54:00 AM

You're very fortunate. I live in the middle of a very hot and dry place (Oklahoma). I liked the river so much I'm considering buying a "sound machine" for the bedroom. Thanks for commenting... Jack

David De La Croes

Date: 6/25/2013 4:58:00 AM

Whenever I find it hard to sleep, I imagine myself at the beach, surround with the sound of the waves. I am sure your beautiful melody will work just as well. Great write, Jack... David

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/25/2013 5:07:00 AM

Thanks for your reply, David. The river sound was better than a sedative. Like you, the ocean has a similar effect for me... Jack