Little One

(*based on the parable of the talents)

Now, Little One 
Let’s see what has been done
with the precious bit
I left YOU with.


     I have been much afraid. 
     Knowing you have paid
     and made great sacrifice,
     I could not entice
     it from my hand
     to spend it on some unsafe plan.
     So, I have wisely buried it in the ground,
     and sure enough I’ve dug around and found it.
     Here, you have it, safe and sound.
     I gladly give it back--perfectly intact


Little One, my heart is broken,
for this bit I left you was but a token
of the promises I’ve spoken.

I invested in YOU.
There was nothing you could do
but win.
If you had tried and failed,
you would have nailed it!
Wiser you would be
and my return I would see
in a servant made savvy.

The risk was mine,
taken to see you shine.

Little One, you were wrong from the start.
Something deep within your heart
has deceived and made you believe
that I am only to be feared,
while all along I’ve cheered you.

Please go your way.
Tomorrow yet another day 
you have. While day is lit,
go make the most of it.

Don’t hide and quake,
refusing risks to take.
For surely more has been wasted
simply not being tasted

This whole misunderstanding
of you believing me to be demanding,
was because you saw less good in me
than I chose to see, in you.




Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 1:22 PM
I have revisited this amazing poem today, and am so glad that I did. It is even more remarkable the second time around---an indicator of true quality! Bravo! ~ Gershon
Awtry Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 11:18 PM
Thank you so very much! I am honored.~ps
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 1:05 PM
I'm not at all familiar with the 'Parable of the Talents,' but I am familiar with talent, and you have it, my friend. This is amazing! Bravo! Best wishes, Gershon
Awtry Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 1:57 PM
you are too kind. thank you.
Rushing Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Beautiful & brilliant!
Awtry Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words and for stopping by :)
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