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Little One

The stars were not in the sky streets burdened by darkness my anger made the moon beams hide your screams , how could I sleep? stop the crying Oh please stop to weep Oh little one It was anger I showed no music composed oh little one giver of my happiness did you know? now we can both look up in the sky! stars shine bright reflecting love that comes from your might Oh little one I found you, I know my little treasure heart and soul Oh little one the moon will be ours we were both fed by tears and fears now we feast on smiles and love oh little one my morning dove Essence of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/21/2018 5:21:00 PM
So very tender Arthur :)
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:38:00 AM
"giver of my happiness" "giver" of a life worth living! "Touch of care"! Inward beauty is unleashed, we remain humane! A powerful video! A strong and heartfelt message! A brilliant write Arthur! Touching and inspirational! Thank you so much for sharing.. A FAV. Stay safe and blessed always.
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Date: 7/1/2018 11:33:00 AM
i am touched; children are supposed to live freely and loved endlessly, art... beautiful!... huggs
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Date: 6/30/2018 9:31:00 AM
Lyrical Arthur, well done.
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Date: 6/29/2018 8:07:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Arthur.
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:42:00 PM
Oh Arthur, such a beautifully moving poetic presentation.. your tender and inspiring poetry and the amazing video clip, both portraying the transformative power of love. A poem par excellence! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:54:00 PM
so tender and so dreamy, loved it Arthuro
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:56:00 AM
My heart was touched by your poetic creativeness and awareness...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/29/2018 8:40:00 AM
aww, so many emotions in this write and a world of stories in your words
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:27:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Art
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:19:00 AM
Arthur, you can almost instantly move the reader into another word and this time when you did it really pulled on the heart strings!! Great write, friend!
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:42:00 AM
Very touching, Arthur.
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