Kash Poet Poet Couplet

Little More In Your Embrace

Waking up early morning daily and join life's rat race,
wish I could sleep a little more in your embrace.




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Placement:2nd; (Sept.2011)

Contest:Couplet Challenge

Sponsor:Susan Burch

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Elizabeth Wesley October 31, 2011 at 10:25 PM Just yawn and turn over, when you retire of course!

Gwendolen Song October 1, 2011 at 2:18 AM Yowza, yowza! Warm and dreamy...it's fall here....cuddling is best hobby at our home! ....u should do well with PD's contest...haiku and limericks are your speciality! I was gonna do one on my favorite breakfast cereal. Running outta time tho. Glad u have had some rest. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire September 30, 2011 at 12:35 PM Oh, that's so sweet, Kash. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown September 30, 2011 at 10:15 AM Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2011 at 11:00 PM Ahhh, this is so sweet, Kashinath. Somehow I had missed it. A big congratulations to you. Hope to see more of you here soon!!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer September 29, 2011 at 4:55 PM Ohh how sweet Kash-Congrats. to you!

Margaret Foster September 27, 2011 at 10:58 PM Looks to me like a contender for a top place. Kash.. good one... Margaret

Russell Sivey September 27, 2011 at 10:48 PM Wow you put an awesome twist to your poem...you added romance a poem that speaks of hating the daily rat race! Great interpretation of the contest! I enjoyed this write!!

Carrie Richards September 27, 2011 at 10:06 PM This makes me smile....I'm sure many will agree with the sentiments in this couplet!!

Nancy Jones September 27, 2011 at 8:11 PM me too.. this one stands out, kash... beauty that! Happy day~N