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Little More In Your Embrace

Waking up early morning daily and join life's rat race,
wish I could sleep a little more in your embrace.




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Placement:2nd; (Sept.2011)

Contest:Couplet Challenge

Sponsor:Susan Burch

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/31/2011 10:25:00 PM Just yawn and turn over, when you retire of course! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 10/1/2011 2:18:00 AM Yowza, yowza! Warm and dreamy...it's fall here....cuddling is best hobby at our home! ....u should do well with PD's contest...haiku and limericks are your speciality! I was gonna do one on my favorite breakfast cereal. Running outta time tho. Glad u have had some rest. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/30/2011 12:35:00 PM Oh, that's so sweet, Kash. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/30/2011 10:15:00 AM Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/29/2011 11:00:00 PM Ahhh, this is so sweet, Kashinath. Somehow I had missed it. A big congratulations to you. Hope to see more of you here soon!! Login to Reply

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer Date: 9/29/2011 4:55:00 PM Ohh how sweet Kash-Congrats. to you! Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 9/27/2011 10:58:00 PM Looks to me like a contender for a top place. Kash.. good one... Margaret Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/27/2011 10:48:00 PM Wow you put an awesome twist to your poem...you added romance a poem that speaks of hating the daily rat race! Great interpretation of the contest! I enjoyed this write!! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/27/2011 10:06:00 PM This makes me smile....I'm sure many will agree with the sentiments in this couplet!! Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 9/27/2011 8:11:00 PM me too.. this one stands out, kash... beauty that! Happy day~N Login to Reply