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Little Hummer

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                                                        The little hummer
                                                 Flits amongst the daylilies
                                                     Observed by the cat

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Lynette Chachere

June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM

lol.hummers are like boxes. ~Always&Forever

Carolyn Devonshire

June 21, 2010 at 10:21 AM

Sweet haiku, Sara. Soup mail for you. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

June 21, 2010 at 1:59 AM

cool cat, a little hummer this is, love it harry

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2010 at 10:37 PM

Hmm, i take it this is not a vehicle! This is really CUTE. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

June 20, 2010 at 6:09 PM

Yes,Haaaaa! all too vivid, Sara. My manx cat lies out on the trampoline and watches the hummers, ratcoons and squirrels feed on the seeds that I put out for them. agape, Moses

John Loving Iii

June 20, 2010 at 2:44 PM

sounds like a picture

Poet Destroyer A

June 20, 2010 at 2:41 PM

Cute picture, i like the observation. Hope the cat does not get to the hummer, have nice father days,..p.d.

Derrick Burton

June 20, 2010 at 12:50 PM

wow short and beautiful poetry here. Enjoy your Sunday and will also check out a few of your other ones. :) Enjoy your Sunday.

Gert W. Knop

June 20, 2010 at 11:06 AM

Nice Haiku, Sara, enjoyed reading it this Sunday afternoon! The workers can't get caffeine in their bodies as they are picking the cherries, i.e. the fruit which contains the coffee beans. Coffee leaves contain also few caffeine and the caffeine concentration of the seeds, the coffee beans is only between 1 and 1,5%. No harm for the workers! It is different with tobacco leaves as they contain nicotine which is easily absorbed through the skin when picking the leaves.....Gert