CayCay Godwin Poet Narrative

Little Girl's Letter To Santa

Hi, Santa, I want a pile of North Pole snow
and I’d sure like to know if it’d be too hard
to make my present a fulltime body guard?
My big brother treats me bad, he’s so mean,
and I know he wrote you for a guillotine!
He does gross things with spit from his tuba
and always shoots me with his bazooka.
Please, a guard on the scene until I’m eighteen?

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Jannie Breedt December 22, 2017 at 3:39 AM Well you can send me the snow. ( and a Mercedes Benz) Smiling here

Joanna Daniel December 16, 2017 at 8:26 AM Hmm, I wouldn't like that behaviour either if I were you, though I always wanted an elder brother.. I do have a younger one, and glad he's younger, after reading this cute poem, CayCay:) I'm sure he treats you better now:) CayCay Godwin December 16, 2017 at 8:41 AM Hi, Sweet, Jo! Because of my history, I've always thought it best to have a girl first. I'm sure you were a sweet and loving 'big' sister, can't imagine you any other way. Glad you enjoyed. Let me wish you the merriest of merries - Merry Christmas ... CayCay

John Gondolf December 16, 2017 at 5:47 AM A cute poem, CayCay, I never had a little sister but I’m sure I wouldn’t have teased her like that ;). John CayCay Godwin December 16, 2017 at 8:12 AM A guy who would be sweet to his younger sister, should have had a sister ... can you get a redo, you think? Just kidding. So glad to have your comment, John. Be blessed ... CayCay

Susan Ashley December 15, 2017 at 8:09 PM A charming, witty and whimsical write CayCay that enticed a warm smile across my face.. Big brothers..! I know what that's like.. I only have one, who was a relentless teaser, wish I would have asked Santa for a bodyguard or a rottweiler... But now, we're best friends. Thank God big brothers grow up :) Good luck in the contest. Hugs xo CayCay Godwin December 16, 2017 at 8:15 AM Its all true, even the spit, but there was no tuba. Billy and I both got kicked out of music class (I was in 4th grade/him the 5th) because we are both tone deaf. So lovely that you and your brother grew to be close. Glad you enjoyed and hope you are having a lover-ly day. CayCay

Alexis Y. December 15, 2017 at 6:50 PM Lol! This is soo funny. I can definately relate with this fine piece. I have two brothers. I'm pretty sure Santa heard the little girl's cry. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones:-) Alexis CayCay Godwin December 16, 2017 at 8:17 AM So glad you laughed - I just love it when that happens. I never actually wrote for a bodyguard, I wanted Barbies too much, and her house, car, etc. Holiday wishes to you, too, my sweet, may joy be yours to have and hold this Christmas. CayCay

Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 12:07 PM ha ha ha forget the snow I'd ask Santa for a new brother!:-) hugs jan xx CayCay Godwin December 15, 2017 at 2:49 PM I tried that. Got a new sister. Glad you laughed. Still sending you light. Hugs ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues December 15, 2017 at 10:51 AM LOL! Perhaps the kid needs a bulldozer, a mile high pile of snow balls, and of course the bodyguard! Love love love, CayCay! CayCay Godwin December 15, 2017 at 11:22 AM We have my real life brother to thank for our laughter! And I feel sure you really did laugh out loud. I love that. All the best ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 15, 2017 at 10:43 AM Giggle :) awesome! xomo Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 15, 2017 at 11:32 AM Merry Ho Ho to you too! I actually do say that too! :) Cheers! (that and "Happy Bunny Day" at Easter) CayCay Godwin December 15, 2017 at 11:23 AM So glad you enjoyed the poem, Maureen! Merry Ho Ho to You ... CayCay