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'little Girls Fall In Love Easily'

I am going to turn back the clock of time,
     to a Christmas when I was six years old;
shopping with my mother one day I saw something,
         it was a life size doll and I fell in love.

I talked about her non stop all the long day,
    and I wrote many letters to Santa (and his wife);
my mother kept saying, "wouldn't you like a baby doll?"
         "no mommy, I want life size Sally!"

On Christmas morning I flew down the stairs,
     the tree was all a glitter and Christmas music played;
but no parcel looked big enough for a life size doll,
         I opened one box to find "stupid" baby doll.

My lip was quivering but I did not cry,
     dad brought a white kitten in his arms for me;
but little brother took it and they were playing,
          so, I went upstairs until mother called.

And there was Aunt Mary holding Sally doll,
     I screamed-  she was my "everything" for weeks!
then-   I picked up baby doll, "she had stuff",
        a cradle, bottles, clothes-  and I fell in love.

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December 14, 2016

Poetry/Narrative/Little Girls Fall in Love Easily
Copyright Protected, ID 858-132-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym

Inspired by the contest, Christmas Day
Sponsor, Alexis 

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Y. Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:16 PM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your first place win in my Christmas Day contest: -) Alexis
Dutta Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Wonderful poem .Most enjoyable. Love.
Oimbo Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 6:49 AM
yes, kids love things the adults don't like
Sathasivam Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 12:23 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Hoffman Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:11 PM
Your nice nostalgic poem brings back fond memories when my sister and I had life size dolls called "Patty Playpals," for some reason my Mom got rid of them when we got a little older…Good luck in the contest BW!~Che
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