Little Girl With a Dream

Born in a primitive land
This little girl had no helping hand
Always gaurded like a treasure
Provided with every luxury, every pleasure
Still the privilege of freedom was unknown to her
Like a dimond she felt
'Precious' but alone she always suffer
For diamond is the strongest stone there is
But is never allowed to showcase its strength
But this diamond wasn't going to accept defeat
To prove herself, she was ready to go to every length
Even tho she was surrounded by a gaurded fence
She managed to work on herself ever since
Her vision-unwavering, her minset - intense
Facing every stone thrown at her fiercely like it was merely a pebble
She wanted to build her empire big with a foundation extremely stable
But walking this path wasn't easy
At times she felt weak , sometimes dissy
There even were times when she thought this  is never gonna end
This pain ,this agony, this hopeless cruel trend
But she kept falling and rising and then falling again
But she always fall forward, learing from her struggles, her pain
" Not today ! " She kept screaming while facing defeat 
Always trying to be the driver of her life
Never in her back seat
Eventually her hard work started paying off
She started getting praised by the same people,on her, who once scoffed
Today she is at the cross roads of her way
The learning phase of her life is over
Now she is about to jump in an unknown ocean, far from the safety of a bay
Even tho my hearts heavy and eyes moist
I have to let my little girl swim alone , I have no choice 
For when she will succeed in her endeavour, from the first row I'll rejoice
This little girl is my best friend with huge dreams in her eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/3/2020 12:00:00 AM
Ishwar, your poem is deep, and has an amazing flow. A very strong friend, with dreams and vision. Thank you for sharing. Linda
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