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Little Girl Lost

I As my fingers trace your silhouette Your lips will feel my kiss The shoulders that have held me up I will never have to miss The strength of you in support The little girl has grown Opened up to live and life Through a love she had never known As your love grows in me The taste of you and the feel Each layer you now remove Just gives our love a new reveal From little girl spoiled and lost To wife and mother too You know you have my heart my love It forever belongs to you. II Working through the small hours Bringing home the bread Two small sons to feed A place to rest your head All those years a grafting Boys then turn to men Believing that was it This was starting again Words jumbled in your head Pages of poems you wrote Making sense of your life Working and living by rote A working life then ended Grandfather, a new role Doting on the new births Even so life took its toll III A little girl was waiting Waiting for many years Not knowing that she was waiting For you to catch her tears Continents apart Worlds so far removed A child innocent and empty And alone, that was proved. Comfort takes its time Your shoulders you gave to me Your love did the healing And that is in the book you see A love so strong so vibrant A love that keeps us apart No continents do divide us Just the hurting of others hearts. © GG 14/07/2013

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Date: 8/6/2013 2:50:00 PM
Extremely beautiful and heart felt. A grand poem. Thank you for the nice review of my poem. Roger Dale Hadden.
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Date: 7/27/2013 2:59:00 PM
love this intriguing and tender write, my friend. Hope you are feeling fighting fit again xx
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:10:00 AM
This was lovely Mandy.The rhyme and flow is excellent in this one.Loved it!
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Date: 7/26/2013 10:37:00 PM
nicely put together ;}
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Date: 7/26/2013 12:08:00 AM
Mandy, who is Ellen? Did she write this? I feel like this is about someone who finally found the connection she had so long been seeking. would like to know the history of this one.
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Date: 7/25/2013 11:56:00 AM
lovely flow to this very nice poem Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:00:00 AM
Passionate and thought provoking poem excellent poem poet.
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Date: 7/24/2013 9:24:00 AM
great mandy.passion all through. great.
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Date: 7/23/2013 2:55:00 PM
This is lovely Mandy, a poem that weaves through time, and allows the heartstrings to bathe in sentiment, i just love this , truly my type of poetry, and you do it so well!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/22/2013 10:02:00 AM
:) Lovely poem, Mandy...simply lovely...The message sweet and full of longing....Hope you are fully recovered, dear! Hugs
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