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Little Colt

Knobby knees unfold Awkward & wobbling to n fro- The colt tries to stand, Gently caressed by His dam's soft prodding nose- He falls down again, Instinct pushes him He must try and try again- Moms knicker assures, In an effort grand He does it! Does it right then- Staggering he falls.... And As the hours pass The colt burns across the field- Mother at his heels! motif: Natural

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Date: 3/20/2014 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Amy!!!! ^__^
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Date: 3/20/2014 5:02:00 AM
Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, amy
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Date: 3/20/2014 4:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Amy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:02:00 AM
Amy , Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 10:39:00 PM
Hey Amy, the life of a colt, how beautiful and intriguing a few moments after a few moments of facing the world.. I like this, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA
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Date: 3/1/2014 10:37:00 PM
Beautiful growth. J.A.B.
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:23:00 AM
- Sweet poem, Amy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2014 5:23:00 AM
It does not take them long to learn how to run. Nicely written.
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Date: 3/1/2014 4:38:00 AM
Beautiful Amy... Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/19/2014 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Amy in Giorgio V. Contest... Verlena