Jeanne Mcgee Poet Rictameter

Little Brother's Surprise

Little
Brother likes sweets
Stole my Halloween prize 
Mom and Dad do not like snitches
So I’ll make a witches spell for some pain
When he eats my candy he will   
Feel only a small ouch 
Because he is
Little


written  10-18-19

If I were your brother Poetry Contest

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Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2020 at 12:46 PM Just found this. So Cute. Have a wonderful day..................

Jennifer Proxenos December 4, 2019 at 1:22 PM A tiny pinch will be enough - imagine a big one! LOL - really good - congrats on your win Jeanne. Hugs and blessings, Jenny

Caren Krutsinger November 2, 2019 at 2:28 PM How nice of you to only give him a tiny pinch. Congratulations!

Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 6:39 AM Nice! Congratulations on your placement Jeanne. ~Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 5:05 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May October 30, 2019 at 9:11 AM Congratulations on your placement Jeanne Mcgee October 30, 2019 at 6:20 PM Thanks little brother!

Ann Foster October 27, 2019 at 3:37 PM syblings... lol... Ann

Mystic Rose Rose October 24, 2019 at 7:18 PM Glad you went easy on him lol gl in the contest

Jack Horne October 23, 2019 at 7:50 AM Ha ha, cute write!

Quoth Theraven October 20, 2019 at 6:12 PM Jeanne, I like how this Halloween poem shaped up. Hopefully not too much spell for little brother. -Richard

Ronald D Thompson October 20, 2019 at 5:09 PM Excellent and cleverly written Jeanne. Certainly spellbinding!..Ron x Jeanne Mcgee October 20, 2019 at 5:40 PM Power to big sisters!

William Kelii Kekaula October 20, 2019 at 12:05 AM Cleverly written--CHEERS to its righteous endeavors ~ Aloha always William Jeanne Mcgee October 20, 2019 at 5:39 PM want some candy my precious?

Regina Mcintosh October 19, 2019 at 10:19 PM This is adorable. Best in the contest. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Jeanne Mcgee October 19, 2019 at 11:10 PM thank you Gina...have a wonderful Sunday.

Sandra Adams October 19, 2019 at 9:28 PM lol...love it...the punishment fits the crime for the season at hand...adorable :) hugs Sandra Adams October 20, 2019 at 7:19 AM i had an older brother, though we were only 14 months apart almost to the day...he was the one who always had the upper hand... it may have worked out better for me if he would have been younger Jeanne Mcgee October 19, 2019 at 11:09 PM I always wanted a little brother to tease!

Mark Peterson October 19, 2019 at 7:12 PM Oh, you wicked thing. What mischievous fun you have spun with this one. Jeanne Mcgee October 19, 2019 at 9:14 PM I always wanted to cast spells...lol