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Little Brother's Surprise



Little
Brother likes sweets
Stole my Halloween prize 
Mom and Dad do not like snitches
So I’ll make a witches spell for some pain
When he eats my candy he will   
Feel only a small ouch 
Because he is
Little


written  10-18-19

If I were your brother Poetry Contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/19/2020 12:46:00 PM

Just found this. So Cute. Have a wonderful day..................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/4/2019 1:22:00 PM

A tiny pinch will be enough - imagine a big one! LOL - really good - congrats on your win Jeanne. Hugs and blessings, Jenny

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/2/2019 2:28:00 PM

How nice of you to only give him a tiny pinch. Congratulations!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:39:00 AM

Nice! Congratulations on your placement Jeanne. ~Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2019 5:05:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/30/2019 6:20:00 PM

Thanks little brother!

Ann Foster

Date: 10/27/2019 3:37:00 PM

syblings... lol... Ann

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/24/2019 7:18:00 PM

Glad you went easy on him lol gl in the contest

Jack Horne

Date: 10/23/2019 7:50:00 AM

Ha ha, cute write!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/20/2019 6:12:00 PM

Jeanne, I like how this Halloween poem shaped up. Hopefully not too much spell for little brother. -Richard

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 10/20/2019 5:09:00 PM

Excellent and cleverly written Jeanne. Certainly spellbinding!..Ron x

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/20/2019 5:40:00 PM

Power to big sisters!

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/20/2019 12:05:00 AM

Cleverly written--CHEERS to its righteous endeavors ~ Aloha always William

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/20/2019 5:39:00 PM

want some candy my precious?

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/19/2019 10:19:00 PM

This is adorable. Best in the contest. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/19/2019 11:10:00 PM

thank you Gina...have a wonderful Sunday.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/19/2019 9:28:00 PM

lol...love it...the punishment fits the crime for the season at hand...adorable :) hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/20/2019 7:19:00 AM

i had an older brother, though we were only 14 months apart almost to the day...he was the one who always had the upper hand... it may have worked out better for me if he would have been younger

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/19/2019 11:09:00 PM

I always wanted a little brother to tease!