Notes About The Poem
My siblings and I grew up together in the 70s,and 80s, you'll notice the reference to ,"The Karate Kid"... my little brother thought he was Karate master and would chop us constantly. Also, Falkor, the dog- like dragon in"The Neverending Story". Another favorite movie growing up.

Little Brother

Little Brother

Frogs and snails
Puppy dog tails
That was you to the core
Throw in a pinch of Karate Kid
Just a dash of Falkor
There you are,little brother mine
Your recipe when young
Then you just kept growing up
I kinda doubt you're done!
You tower over other men
And you're also pretty tall
Tower over,  no, not in height
But in character,you beat all
Compassion became the ingredient
That makes up the bulk of you
Add a cup of charisma
A charmer through and through
Whisk briskly with sharp wit and humor
With laughter and sly smiles
Put in the oven of love and respect
And Bake a little while.
Glaze over liberally with talent
From God to you it flows
Decorate with fatherhood
So beautiful to behold
Before you were made in flesh
God took something sweet away
The sugar, spice…everything nice
He returned on your wedding day.
It may seem like you are finished
That God has made you what you'll be
But He isn't finished with you,
 little brother, Wait and see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Turner Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Yes, brothers are pretty cool whether older or younger. An enjoyable read, Crystol.
Woods Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Tysm!
Ridley Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 6:21 AM
I love this!! Great piece
Woods Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 4:01 PM
Thank you ever so much Jasen! I'll visit your writing soon!
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