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Little Blue House

Powerful images Of sound mind sanity clear but the body is dying end it here To this end there shall be an end Final thoughts out in the open In a calm submissive place This little blue house self-assisted we shall wait... (I wrote this after watching a very powerful documentary on youtube called: Terry Pratchett, choosing to die. If you can watch it, as it's unique and a subject that while frowned upon should be discussed more and not just swept under the rug. This documentary had me in tears and I cried and cried and then I wrote this, I intended to write more but looking at it now I feel it says enough it doesn't need depth and multiple paragraphs the message is simple and clear.) Gordon Joe Orton (Kyle Ralston)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/5/2016 2:33:00 PM
Gordon,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2012 4:16:00 PM
I saw one about assisted suicide in Norway? Denmark? It's a harsh subject but something one has to come to grips with..you are a very deep thinker. Light & Love
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Date: 7/14/2011 12:02:00 PM
Welcome to Premium Membership, I hope you enjoy the journey, may I invite you to enter my contest ~~
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Date: 7/13/2011 6:44:00 PM
Nice expressions on little blue house, Gordon
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:31:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Gordon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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