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Little Annoyances

I feel I‘m the reason For our eventual separation And I’m sorry. Sorry for every little annoyances The petty irritating nuances All the painful sideways Glances That I’ve ever given. And the fact that I’ve lost you I’m sorry. To our falling apart And me not meeting Your ultimate needs For this I’m sorry, I’m sorry. Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's "Where's The Blame" contest 9/19/2012

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/20/2012 8:09:00 AM

nicely done - I especially like the part about the painful sideways glances. good luck in the contest!

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/20/2012 6:49:00 AM

This is painful to read. It describes the sad ending of so many relationships and the guilt that follows! Well scribed my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2012 6:17:00 AM

If given a second chance, would you change?..That is the true proof of being sorry and repenting.That is if this is based on fact.Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great work..Winner in my book..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2012 3:24:00 AM

a deep write, russell...expressive words do capture your humble intent!... memorable read on honest apology!... enjoyed my friend..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 9:49:00 PM

good entry. And it's not even about halloween. hahaha. It's nice to see one about "blame" here!

Don Johnson

Date: 9/19/2012 9:48:00 PM

up the creek with a brain thats addled, calamity till im unsaddled, or freak... yes these relationships falter, an we lose the horse n halter, catch another horse ....no remorse:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/19/2012 6:21:00 PM

We all have the same regrets at one time or another! This says what so many of us wish we could say......a sincere and touching poem!