Russell Sivey Poet Free verse

Little Annoyances

I feel I‘m the reason
For our eventual separation
And I’m sorry.
Sorry for every little annoyances
The petty irritating nuances
All the painful sideways
Glances
That I’ve ever given.
And the fact that I’ve lost you
I’m sorry.
To our falling apart
And me not meeting
Your ultimate needs
For this I’m sorry,
I’m sorry.

Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's "Where's The Blame" contest

9/19/2012

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Black Eyed Susan September 20, 2012 at 8:09 AM nicely done - I especially like the part about the painful sideways glances. good luck in the contest!

Jack Ellison September 20, 2012 at 6:49 AM This is painful to read. It describes the sad ending of so many relationships and the guilt that follows! Well scribed my friend!

Sara Kendrick September 20, 2012 at 6:17 AM If given a second chance, would you change?..That is the true proof of being sorry and repenting.That is if this is based on fact.Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great work..Winner in my book..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2012 at 3:24 AM a deep write, russell...expressive words do capture your humble intent!... memorable read on honest apology!... enjoyed my friend..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2012 at 9:49 PM good entry. And it's not even about halloween. hahaha. It's nice to see one about "blame" here!

Don Johnson September 19, 2012 at 9:48 PM up the creek with a brain thats addled, calamity till im unsaddled, or freak... yes these relationships falter, an we lose the horse n halter, catch another horse ....no remorse:)

Carrie Richards September 19, 2012 at 6:21 PM We all have the same regrets at one time or another! This says what so many of us wish we could say......a sincere and touching poem!