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Lithe As a Fairy

Eating sensibly is the name of the game No more gorging, that's not good for our frame Getting lithe as a fairy Singing like a canary Happy as poop I'm no longer shamed

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/4/2017 8:33:00 AM

I wonder where the pounds go//When you lose them so?//Does some Sumo find them?//To his buttocks bind them?//Or to the fat farm to make ounces grow? LITHE ON JACKIE BUOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/4/2017 1:49:00 PM

Great lim, my good buddy! I've often wondered that myself! Soon need to buy a whole new wardrobe! :( Not stopping yet, 12 more lbs to go!!! WOW I FEEL SO LITHE!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/4/2017 6:57:00 AM

Talking about poop, if you don't eat as much, you won't poop as much, yay! And your stomach will surely shrink, as much as you think, and will give you a smile, today! I surely loved reading this awesome poem this morning! You have amazed me by the funny aspects of this clever little ditty! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/4/2017 7:20:00 AM

Right on Sir Russell... lost 48 lbs.! Eating sensibly, exercising really works!!! GOOD MORNING RUSSELL!!!