Litany of Poetic Devices

The night peevished in silence
Here on the grass I sit-but my heart stood
I hear my tiny thought tingle
It fluttered in my head like the wings of a bird
But, will this peace that I seek find me? 
Even the sea is a lion that dares the dry land 
Tick tock the clock sounds endlessly
Everyday was never a happy day
Fightings fightings killings
What a sad joy
More dead at hand. Souls finding the sole way to live
Whilst every smile was a pretense, there was more pains to harbour
The world drift slowly to its extreme end every seconds
But, will wait man, patiently , till love and unity king again. 



1. Personification ( the night peevished in silence) 
2. Antithesis (here on the ground I sit -but my heart stood) 
3. Alliteration ( I hear my tiny thought tingle) 
4. Simile (it flutters in my head like the wings of a bird) 
5. Rhetorical question (but, will this peace I seek find me?)  
6. Metaphor (even the sea is a lion that dare the dry land) 
7. Onomatopoeia (tick tock, the clock sounds endlessly) 
8.internal rhyme (everyday was never a happy day) 
9. Repetition (fightings fightings) 
10. Oxymoron (what a sad joy) 
11. Pun (souls finding the sole way to live) 
12. Archaism (whilst every smile was a pretense)
13 tautology (extreme end) 
14.  Inversion ( but,  will wait man, patiently, till love and unity king again)
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September 13, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Florence. A lovely poem to read. Thanks for entering this challenging contest. Well done.
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