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Lit Candles

Candles flicker like a lover's whisper, tickling walls with whimsical illusions, becoming purer, becoming crisper with cinnamon swirled laughter fusions. 3-7-2020 Reference: Warm Poetic Jots, 12-18-19 Contest: Rithimus Divisa 2 Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Date: 3/9/2020 5:22:00 AM
Great choice. This brings some great images forth. Love your word choices. Best wishes :) hugs
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Date: 3/8/2020 8:33:00 AM
Wonderful lines... Good luck in the contest Juliet..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/10/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thanks, Jenish.
Date: 3/8/2020 6:52:00 AM
hey you did this very well.. especially that last line..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/10/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One.
Date: 3/8/2020 5:06:00 AM
The dance of the candle flame...Nice one
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/10/2020 12:43:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo.
Date: 3/8/2020 12:34:00 AM
Wow Juliet this is so unique. I feel compelled to read your poem in its entirety. I hope this does well in Greg's contest. xxoo
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/10/2020 12:43:00 PM
Thanks, Connie. Blessings.

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