Juliet Ligon Poet Rhyme

Lit Candles

Candles flicker like a lover's whisper,
tickling walls with whimsical illusions,
becoming purer, becoming crisper
with cinnamon swirled laughter fusions.

3-7-2020

Reference: Warm Poetic Jots, 12-18-19
Contest: Rithimus Divisa 2
Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Sandra Adams March 9, 2020 at 5:22 AM Great choice. This brings some great images forth. Love your word choices. Best wishes :) hugs

Jenish Somadas March 8, 2020 at 8:33 AM Wonderful lines... Good luck in the contest Juliet.. Juliet Ligon March 10, 2020 at 12:44 PM Thanks, Jenish.

Silent One March 8, 2020 at 6:52 AM hey you did this very well.. especially that last line.. Juliet Ligon March 10, 2020 at 12:44 PM Thanks, Silent One.

Arturo Michael March 8, 2020 at 5:06 AM The dance of the candle flame...Nice one Juliet Ligon March 10, 2020 at 12:43 PM Thanks, Arturo.

Connie Marcum Wong March 8, 2020 at 12:34 AM Wow Juliet this is so unique. I feel compelled to read your poem in its entirety. I hope this does well in Greg's contest. xxoo Juliet Ligon March 10, 2020 at 12:43 PM Thanks, Connie. Blessings.