Lit

calm moonlit river
one arrow in her quiver…
wind brings a shiver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 3:47 PM
you know what? if you simply said "wind shivers" in that last line, you could submit this into the 15 syllable haiku contest! It would sure be high on MY list if I were a judge.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 3:46 PM
oh,my,this really gets the imagination going!! Love this one.
Shreve Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 11:41 AM
one arrow in her quiver well done, what a way to deliver
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