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Listening In Spring

Blue Jays on a branch practicing what they sing Lions roaming the safari proudly acting like a king Leaves falling down, back and forth they gently swing Listen it is Mother Nature that you are now hearing Winter melts away and rain washed into the Spring Two squirrels run up a tree for a little fun-time fling The wind whips in the canyons, off the hills it pings This beauty of our world is uncomparable to anything Within the darkest night glowing eyes are always peering With sounds that have their own special sort of ring The Worlds way up high back and forth the stars they sling So many unanswered questions the Heavens always bring The falcon in the sky up and down it flaps each wing Searching the field below for it's days first offering Even sometimes the act of a kill is still a wondeful thing So grateful to be blessed of something so awe inspiring
Written for Monorhyme Poetry Contest 05/25/18 Theme: Nature Hosted by:Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 5/26/2018 1:18:00 AM
well done, Brian. I am sure the sponsor will enjoy the theme of spring!!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/26/2018 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 5/25/2018 9:46:00 PM
beautiful springtime melody where treasures of nature abound, brian... mine pales in comparison to this!... huggs
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/25/2018 10:43:00 PM
Wow thank you nette but I seriously doubt that yours pales in comparison you are such a beautiful poet!
Date: 5/25/2018 3:06:00 PM
Brian, this is an excellent monorhyme, bringing us everything to see. Good luck in the contest :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/25/2018 10:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi
Date: 5/25/2018 2:57:00 PM
what wonderful springtime imagery Brian, i chose spring too for my poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/25/2018 10:42:00 PM
thank you Jan I am glad you enjoyed it and I bet your springtime poem is fantastic so I'm gonna go read it right now!

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