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Listening

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The 
Man
Prophet
Elijah
Man of God listend
God spoke to him tells what to do
Go east_ hide by Cherith Brook_ east where enters Jordan 
Drink from brook, eat what ravens bring you,for I have told them to feed you_he did what God said




(with this there is not way to make the line of 21 syllables fit but I wanted to finish the 
story)

faithhistoryinspirationalnaturegodgodfibonacci

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Rhia Madison Thomer

January 10, 2011 at 10:45 PM

what a challenge to write this could have been. you mastered it quite well i think. good write, congrats on this piece. --Madison

Gert W. Knop

January 8, 2011 at 8:01 AM

Well written Sara! have a good one!...Gert

Gert W. Knop

January 8, 2011 at 8:01 AM

Well written Sara! have a good one!...Gert

Daver Austin

January 6, 2011 at 6:03 AM

Good finish. I think all forms might survive a little license. Love, Dave

Doris Culverhouse

January 6, 2011 at 5:36 AM

interesting work mom!

Andrea Dietrich

January 5, 2011 at 3:51 PM

Sara, YOu should just put the ending underneath and tell that it was supposed to be on only one line. (you didn't finish the last little part, right?) Hey, I am always happy to see you here at Soup too. And yes, Dale was my stepbrother run over by a drunk driver right before graduating law school. Many years ago that was. I met him when I was 8 and he was 12. LUv, Andrea

Joe Maverick

January 5, 2011 at 2:17 PM

a good write on a good subject..Sara. a good subject of the Lord..that is!

Nette Onclaud

January 5, 2011 at 1:28 PM

you uplift me sara with this wise words that bring me balm of contenmnet.. hope you are fine!! wonderful to see this before snooze time.. :) nette

Carolyn Devonshire

January 5, 2011 at 11:41 AM

An inspiring Biblical story, Sara. It shows what can be accomplished when we learn to "listen." Love, Carolyn

Jancarl Campi

January 5, 2011 at 8:40 AM

Date: 1/5/2011 10:30 AM Hello Sara, hope you are feeling better. Thanks for your comment on my poem Poetry and Mysticism. I have no idea how I wrote that poem, the words just flowed. I am sure that when we get to heaven our souls will be glad. Thank you for this beautiful story. May God bless you. Jancarl