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Listening

. The Man Prophet Elijah Man of God listend God spoke to him tells what to do Go east_ hide by Cherith Brook_ east where enters Jordan Drink from brook, eat what ravens bring you,for I have told them to feed you_he did what God said (with this there is not way to make the line of 21 syllables fit but I wanted to finish the story)

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 1/10/2011 10:45:00 PM

what a challenge to write this could have been. you mastered it quite well i think. good write, congrats on this piece. --Madison

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/8/2011 8:01:00 AM

Well written Sara! have a good one!...Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/8/2011 8:01:00 AM

Well written Sara! have a good one!...Gert

Daver Austin

Date: 1/6/2011 6:03:00 AM

Good finish. I think all forms might survive a little license. Love, Dave

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/6/2011 5:36:00 AM

interesting work mom!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2011 3:51:00 PM

Sara, YOu should just put the ending underneath and tell that it was supposed to be on only one line. (you didn't finish the last little part, right?) Hey, I am always happy to see you here at Soup too. And yes, Dale was my stepbrother run over by a drunk driver right before graduating law school. Many years ago that was. I met him when I was 8 and he was 12. LUv, Andrea

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/5/2011 2:17:00 PM

a good write on a good subject..Sara. a good subject of the Lord..that is!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/5/2011 1:28:00 PM

you uplift me sara with this wise words that bring me balm of contenmnet.. hope you are fine!! wonderful to see this before snooze time.. :) nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/5/2011 11:41:00 AM

An inspiring Biblical story, Sara. It shows what can be accomplished when we learn to "listen." Love, Carolyn

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/5/2011 8:40:00 AM

Date: 1/5/2011 10:30 AM Hello Sara, hope you are feeling better. Thanks for your comment on my poem Poetry and Mysticism. I have no idea how I wrote that poem, the words just flowed. I am sure that when we get to heaven our souls will be glad. Thank you for this beautiful story. May God bless you. Jancarl

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/5/2011 8:34:00 AM

A good retelling of a famous story found in the Old Testament (aka Holy Scriptures)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/5/2011 7:01:00 AM

This is really good and new form for me. You have done a great job sara.