Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Listen To Uncle Jack

So all you kiddies, come gather round
Uncle Jack's got a story to tell
If you don't take heed of his sage advice
You'll end up not doing so well

Here's the deal, my good little buddies
Live like there's no tomorrow
No mamby-pamby sitting on the fence
Your time here is only borrowed

Grab the brass ring, hang on for dear life
You only get to go round one time
No second chance to make a first impression
Only you are in charge of the climb

The rewards are many for those who play
This challenging game of life
The payoff is years of good time fun
Without all that nasty old strife

Did you listen to what Uncle Jack had to say
He ain't just blowing it out his ears
Been around the block quite few times
And wishes you a life of good cheer

©Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal March 17, 2018 at 2:22 AM "Only you are in charge of the climb" Powerful and inspiring line! Truly meaningful advice. Always, Laura Jack Ellison March 17, 2018 at 6:03 AM Thank you, again dear Laura! I feel my age and life's experiences allow me to pass along some good advice!!! Lovsies, Happy Jack XOX

Cecilia Macfarlane September 16, 2012 at 8:17 PM Words of wisdom in poetic form, great advice.....awesome write Jack! Hugs Jack Ellison September 17, 2012 at 5:21 AM You are very kind, dear friend... thanks oodles! Love and big hugs, Jack

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer September 15, 2012 at 5:47 PM What a fun, inspirational write Jack! Love it. :) Jack Ellison September 15, 2012 at 6:58 PM Hey Rogue Rhymer! Thanks a bunch for your kind words! Until we meet again... love and hugs, Jack

Carol Eastman September 15, 2012 at 10:01 AM This was a great poem to wake up to this morning. I think you'd like my 'Goldfish and the Frog' and 'Duck Side Story'. They were meant for kids, too. Jack Ellison September 15, 2012 at 10:42 AM As soon as I check out theses last two that you commented on, I'll be over to take a peek!

Russell Sivey September 14, 2012 at 8:59 PM This is a brilliant write Jack, simply brilliant write! I really enjoyed your message that you wrote about, it is a very meaningful and much needed advice! What a delightful and astounding poem! Fabulous piece, Great Work!! Jack Ellison September 15, 2012 at 5:09 AM WOW!!! What a fantastic response to my little kiddie poem! Thanks a bunch, Russell... it is very very much appreciated my friend!!!