Listen To the Trees

Listen to the trees…
how dark their voices in the moonless night--
unnerving shades that only today were bright, green, sunny things;
and now their quivering leaves, remind me more
of scarecrow sleeves,
nearby not a bird would light
unless he were a terrible sight.
Listen to the wind…
storm voice near the distant eye--
Listen! Listen! Listen! Such a thunderous cry!
There!--the last ray of sunlight gone, in a fester of billowing clouds;
with the last quiet moment, in a splatter of furious sounds;
down the torrent upon us
the wind like sickles and mowing blades;
Listen! Listen! Listen!--to the trees now toppling shades.
Yet, in the midst of all madness--
the air, a hornet of frantic leaves;
wind tugging at our garments,
flapping and fluttering like scarecrow sleeves--
a quiet comes over us;
halfway through passes a silent eye;
blesses us with a peaceful moment;
reassuringly winks good-bye….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/18/2021 2:14:00 PM
Hi, I have read a handful of you poems and I must say that I like them oh so much. "Listen to the trees" in particular Is such an exceptional composition. It brings about strong positive vibes 'in the midst of all the madness'. The poem lays bare the catharsis of writing from one's core. I believe you have a great thing going with your writing. Thank you for sharing the splendid work.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/18/2021 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joyce, for letting me know how much you enjoyed this work, and thank you for the positive encouragement. Blessings my friend!
Date: 10/29/2016 4:42:00 PM
I love the relationship you seem to have with trees, they do speak if we listen. This is a beautiful poem Joe. 7 ; )
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Date: 7/30/2016 10:02:00 AM
Joe, I love the imagery here.it expresses feelings I have had but didn't know how to put in words. I especially like the last few lines. A quiet comes over us....
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/30/2016 2:18:00 PM
You made my day! Blessings my friend!!
Date: 7/19/2016 11:09:00 AM
A delightful offering, Joe...full of life! I listen with you....Regards // paul
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/30/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Paul; have a great weekend!!
Date: 7/12/2016 3:51:00 AM
Nicely written, truly enjoyed reading.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/12/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 7/5/2016 11:34:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading some of your work today, especially liked this one. I have always liked the image of trees at night...well, trees anytime. Thank you for visiting my poem and you kind comments.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/5/2016 6:13:00 PM
Blessings my friend! Have a beautiful day!! Thank you.
Date: 6/8/2016 10:04:00 PM
Joe, you bring the reader along a dreamy ride! "the wind like sickles and mowing blades;" WOW! good work!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/9/2016 6:33:00 AM
Ouch! Those sickles and mowing blades! Love it! Thank you, Jimbo.
Date: 6/7/2016 8:34:00 AM
Amazing!!! I agree with Paul, love the way it flows and excellent images. A 7! Here is the best compliment I can give you, you sound like me even your subject matter. Read my poem 'I Saw The Trees Laughing', I think you'll like it. Your friend Phil.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/7/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Phil; loved your "I Saw The Trees Laughing"--I think I will go out in my backyard and tickle a few, for firsthand enchantment.
Date: 6/7/2016 6:54:00 AM
Remarkable imagery in this poem, together with excellent flow. I enjoyed every line, and I didn't want it to end. Thanks for sharing it, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/7/2016 7:59:00 AM
You made my day! Thank you, Paul.
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