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Listen To the Chaffinches

How pleasing to us are the quiet of the country lanes.
The vociferous extrovert chaffinches sing their refrains.

Remember how often we would trek the lonely paths
Occasionally they find some rill and have their baths

So common all over earth since they love to migrate,
Flying happily but from birds of prey quickly elate.

Their natural habitat is the woodland where they can rest.
Their songs communicate in different suggestions best

But especially when the mating seasons begin.
How lovely to listen songs far from the city's din
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George Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Finches are such lovely birds. I had two finches in a cage. They lived so happy, occasionally taking a dip in the container of water kept inside the cage. After a year or so one of them died and its mate became so lonely and didn't even care to eat or take bath. Seeing its lonely state, I set it free. All these thoughts came to my mind on reading your lovely poem.
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 6:53 AM
What a delightful poem Victor, :-) Hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 3:00 AM
Beautiful sounds to listen to ...I experience nature's music close on here ... no sounds other than the animals :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Great information, Victor.. That is one thing I love to read and that is nature.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Love the sound of birdsong Victor, your poem reflects the loveliness of their sweet singing too. Hugs, Belle
Gilmour Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 4:57 AM
your words ae delightful to read dear Victor, as are the bird songs to hear. I have a beautiful blackbird that serenades me each evening, although he is really serenading his true love... A beautiful poem Victor ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Daniel Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 1:15 AM
Nothing more enjoyable than to listen to the songs of birds, great poem, Victor:)
May Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Lovely bird songs on country lanes, Very nicely penne Victor
Buehler Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:44 PM
The charm and beauty of the country, with little but sweet birdsong to break the stillness, is evoked by your well rendered verse, Victor. :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 8:53 AM
hmmm, I don't recall if I have ever seen one. I wonder if they are even in my area to have heard them. Very nice, Victor
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Love the second line!
Poet Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 5:47 AM
Your poem is very uplifting, Victor, it makes the reader feeling calm and soothes their heart. Being with nature listening to birdsongs is so relaxing and pleasing. Be blessed
Pandit Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 5:31 AM
One with nature, your poem resonates in rhythms of birdsongs, Victor. Lovely ode to the gifts they give us, singing cheerfully.
Cunningham Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:42 AM
Nothing more pleasing to the ear than birdsong especially in the countryside. Tom
Skelly Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:07 AM
It's very uplifting to hear bird song, such a heartfelt sound from such a small creature..Delice
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