Listen To Me

Listen  to  me

Walking  through  the  streets  all  alone,
searching  for  hope  amidst  the  blue  sky.
Don’t  know  where  to  go  and  what  to  do,
waiting  for  the  sun  to  shine.

The  sky  above  indicates  no  sign,
my  strength  works  no  more.
Afraid  to  die  with  nothing  in  hands,
seeking  for  god  to  help  me  out.

My  purity  has  got  no  meaning ,
no  one  to  judge,  to  understand.
Whats  the  use  when  life  itself  is  a  mystery,
and  solution  not  in  my  mind.

Please  forgive  me  and  understand  my  pain,
cause  I  also  want  happiness  to  dwell  in  my  heart.
Let  me  also  taste  the  sweet  fruit,
For  years  have  passed  and  still  waititng  for  each  new  dawn.
       

 Foram Muchhala
foram_blackhorse@yahoo.co.in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/7/2024 4:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:43:00 PM
Foram Muchhala, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:02:00 PM
FORAM, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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