Listen, My Son

listen, my son
to the wind's unspoken words
(as subtle as moonbeams)
carried on wings of the birds
for no man made pleasure
can fill a man's soul
no synthetic sunbeams
can pay heaven's toll
so, listen, my son
to your young beating heart
authentic and fierce
you've held it right from the start
so, listen
so closely
and never forget
that a father's great love
(for you and forever)
has never compared
to a Creator's love yet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 13, 2014 at 6:10 PM
a heartfelt poem... SKAT
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March 13, 2014 at 2:42 AM
Great piece Andrew, I can empathise with this one. Nicely written. Rob
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Beautifully written, Hope your son heeds his father's words. Jan x
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