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Listen Carefully

Early morn
          Two wide-set yellow eyes
            Peek through cobalt blue
              Remnants of last night's rain
                Wonderful water for all the plants and animals

Across the way
  Four lovely cedars or Cyprus stand
    Like sentinels guarding the road
      Lovely silvery green shines
        Washed and still wet with rain

Two mockingbirds
  Sing so joyfuly one to my left
    The other one to my right
      I wonder what they are discussing
        Responsibilities of parenthood or politics

The clouds
  Seem to be dissipating
    Or the sun has risen higher or a little of both
      I am wondering if there will be more rain today or will last night's shower
        Be all that we get, of course, we could use a little more

Soaking up
  The cool, damp, quiet
    The small amount of the morn that I can enjoy 
      Out on the porch
         Each second so precious

Close my eyes
   Listen carefully
     Perhaps I can catch
       An elusive susurrus of nature to carry through the day
         Filled with positive emotions, help me make it God
      
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Kulkarni Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 9:13 AM
A beautiful expression of 'being in the moment'. Nature is truly magical!
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, Smita, for the nice comments on my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Beaufort Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Sara, lovely impressions you share! I hope it only gets better every time.
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 1:05 PM
Thank you, Duke. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 8:02 PM
You are one with Nature, Sara. With admiration, Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 1:05 PM
Thank you, Gershon. I do love to get out early in the morn while it is still a little cool. I can't handle the heat or the humidity though. Sara K
Horne Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 6:36 AM
beautiful porch inspiration, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 8:00 AM
The wonders of his creation Sara, there's so much beauty around us. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 8:04 AM
Tom, so far so good as the week goes. Yes, God's creation is wonderful, and I need to appreciate it more. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 6:48 AM
- Listen, see, hear and feel... capture the lovely day, Sara :) - A wonderful poem, thank you :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 8:03 AM
Ahh!! Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind review and time spent here. Sara K
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