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Did you hear me once calling In the middle of cold dark nights Did you hear me whisper I long to feel you by my side. Quiet nights, shed in tears Hear my voice as I scream I can bare all these pains Can you come tonight and stay? I can hardly breathe I'm suffocating I'm drowning Hear me calling. Can you hear me Can you come near Can you hold me Can you stay, tonight?

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Edward Snyder

Date: 9/2/2017 3:24:00 PM

pretty sweet, we feel your pain. nicley done, Aiyah

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/24/2017 9:54:00 PM

Many a lonely soul has uttered those closing words.. So sad but so beautiful.... A fav....

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/19/2017 2:01:00 AM

Penned with great heart ...from a beautiful heart:) much love and hugs to you Aiyah xoxo

Phil Capitano

Date: 8/9/2017 1:47:00 PM

Deeply...this touches deeply the soul of a wanderer looking for love. Nice one.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/7/2017 11:22:00 AM

A great piece AiyaH

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/7/2017 11:10:00 AM

I can relate to this so deeply from long ago and from now through my oldest daughter. The emotional pain of it you have expressed so beautifully. This is a Fave for me Aiyah! God Bless : )

Aiyah Torres
Date: 8/7/2017 11:32:00 AM

Thank you for a warm visit on my poem , Connie. :O) I'm happy to know that you haven't forgotten me yet. How are you? .. I hope I can have more time to spend with everyone here in Poetry Soup. :) hugs! :* :*