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Did you hear me once calling
In the middle of cold dark nights
Did you hear me whisper
I long to feel you by my side.

Quiet nights, shed in tears
Hear my voice as I scream
I can bare all these pains
Can you come tonight and stay?

I can hardly breathe 
I'm suffocating
I'm drowning
Hear me calling.

Can you hear me
Can you come near
Can  you hold me
Can you stay, tonight?

Copyright © Aiyah Torres | Year Posted 2017

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Edward Snyder Date: 9/2/2017 3:24:00 PM pretty sweet, we feel your pain. nicley done, Aiyah Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 8/24/2017 9:54:00 PM Many a lonely soul has uttered those closing words.. So sad but so beautiful.... A fav.... Login to Reply

Lynn Marie Date: 8/19/2017 2:01:00 AM Penned with great heart ...from a beautiful heart:) much love and hugs to you Aiyah xoxo Login to Reply

Phil Capitano Date: 8/9/2017 1:47:00 PM Deeply...this touches deeply the soul of a wanderer looking for love. Nice one. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 8/7/2017 11:22:00 AM A great piece AiyaH Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/7/2017 11:10:00 AM I can relate to this so deeply from long ago and from now through my oldest daughter. The emotional pain of it you have expressed so beautifully. This is a Fave for me Aiyah! God Bless : ) Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 8/7/2017 11:32:00 AM Thank you for a warm visit on my poem , Connie. :O) I'm happy to know that you haven't forgotten me yet. How are you? .. I hope I can have more time to spend with everyone here in Poetry Soup. :) hugs! :* :*