Aiyah Torres Poet Concrete

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Did you hear me once calling
In the middle of cold dark nights
Did you hear me whisper
I long to feel you by my side.

Quiet nights, shed in tears
Hear my voice as I scream
I can bare all these pains
Can you come tonight and stay?

I can hardly breathe 
I'm suffocating
I'm drowning
Hear me calling.

Can you hear me
Can you come near
Can  you hold me
Can you stay, tonight?

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Edward Snyder September 2, 2017 at 3:24 PM pretty sweet, we feel your pain. nicley done, Aiyah

Robert Lindley August 24, 2017 at 9:54 PM Many a lonely soul has uttered those closing words.. So sad but so beautiful.... A fav....

Lynn Marie August 19, 2017 at 2:01 AM Penned with great heart ...from a beautiful heart:) much love and hugs to you Aiyah xoxo

Phil Capitano August 9, 2017 at 1:47 PM Deeply...this touches deeply the soul of a wanderer looking for love. Nice one.

Tim Smith August 7, 2017 at 11:22 AM A great piece AiyaH

Connie Marcum Wong August 7, 2017 at 11:10 AM I can relate to this so deeply from long ago and from now through my oldest daughter. The emotional pain of it you have expressed so beautifully. This is a Fave for me Aiyah! God Bless : ) Aiyah Torres August 7, 2017 at 11:32 AM Thank you for a warm visit on my poem , Connie. :O) I'm happy to know that you haven't forgotten me yet. How are you? .. I hope I can have more time to spend with everyone here in Poetry Soup. :) hugs! :* :*