Listen

“Be still. Be still. Listen for what is real.” Alleviate congestion of tomorrows what will be for what is held in future tense you’re not allowed to see “Be still. Be still. Listen for what is real.” Release the loads of yesterday for they are passed away Here and now in this today allow what’s real to stay “Be still. Be still. Listen for what is real.” © Debra Squyres 10/24/14

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Wilma Neels

Date: 10/28/2014 7:28:00 AM

Debra, what an awesome reminder this is. Those quiet moments are sometimes needed more than anything else. I enjoyed reading this gem of yours. xx

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/26/2014 1:00:00 PM

Dear Debra. Hello first of all welcome to the soup site, This is the first poem I've read of yours and I am impressed, got your message loud and clear, just stay still and listen, look around you and see the beauty all around you. Great job and what a wonderful positive message that you've given to the readers, thanks for sharing, cheri

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/25/2014 8:38:00 AM

I feel God carrying your load in this piece Debra. Peace be still and know that I am God. That's a passage that rings throughout your poem. Love your Godly grace. Peace. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/25/2014 7:52:00 AM

- Put away thoughts from yesterday ..... lovely written Debra! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/25/2014 7:49:00 AM

Wonderful, this is simply a wonderful write my friend! I have been away for a long time, school has kept me very busy! But I'll be around for these couple days before school starts again! To bring some Halloween cheer! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem here this morning! You have brought a smile with this grandiose piece! What a fantastic write! Great Work!!