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Be like waves which crash on the jetty Washing all our impurities away Waves like a crescent curtain dangling in its fringes Unearthing sunken precious stones Hurling them up above the elevation Hanging on dear life right ahead Waves that don't crush us because we wish it Waves that surface and in turn are subdued Waves we are in this depth of consciousness Appeal to and unearth your Godly wisdom Uphold and hang in the untimely crush Be strong, be heard, be known and be well For all will suffice at the end of the spray

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Date: 3/26/2016 10:05:00 PM
Coty Benrimoj, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:40:00 PM
COTY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 12/3/2014 8:54:00 PM
A wave of wisdom unrelenting in rush towards the beach of buried love, wings water made, unbreakable, undeniable removing years of heavy shore...the brilliance in your metaphor is in the finish Coty, "For all will suffice in the end of the spray..." A fantastic poem of empowering enlightenment. J.A.B.
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Date: 10/15/2014 12:31:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Coty- I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Coty Benrimoj
Date: 11/15/2014 9:21:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise for your warm welcome. I enjoyed reading poems too. Blessings, Coty

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