Listen

Be like waves which crash on the jetty

Washing all our impurities away

Waves like a crescent curtain dangling in its fringes

Unearthing sunken precious stones

Hurling them up above the elevation

Hanging on dear life right ahead

Waves that don't crush us because we wish it

Waves that surface and in turn are subdued

Waves we are in this depth of consciousness

Appeal to and unearth your Godly wisdom

Uphold and hang in the untimely crush

Be strong, be heard, be known and be well

For all will suffice at the end of the spray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 26, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Coty Benrimoj, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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August 10, 2015 at 7:40 PM
COTY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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December 3, 2014 at 8:54 PM
A wave of wisdom unrelenting in rush towards the beach of buried love, wings water made, unbreakable, undeniable removing years of heavy shore...the brilliance in your metaphor is in the finish Coty, "For all will suffice in the end of the spray..." A fantastic poem of empowering enlightenment. J.A.B.
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October 15, 2014 at 12:31 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Coty- I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 15, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Thank you Anne Lise for your warm welcome. I enjoyed reading poems too. Blessings, Coty
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