Listen

Listen as the night falls dark Visions pass you by On longer roads Than you have ever trod Your feet will lead you Nevermore For dreams are now Your eyes

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/21/2013 7:16:00 PM

about this poem: wow..... nevermore... love the word... as E A P... yells... "evermore!" Terry, love the path my eyes have visioned for me... I listen in every stroke of my feet... good verse...pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/21/2013 7:14:00 PM

Terry, I know I've read a few of your poems...but here I am again saying hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV PD""