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just when i needed a time... a warm hug to comfort my frail mind to free my self from anguish.. frustration... i.. hidden beyond the light of wisdom, succumbs to aggravation where journey to hope is rejected hinders thy first steps... i... need soft winds to whisper my citations... just a minute console should you turn and listen even for just a second... i.... whimpers inside without tears.. i cant see anything please... just... listen.....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2016 12:39:00 PM

Harris, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2016 3:59:00 PM

Harris, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **

Scunder Dicychael

Date: 4/9/2013 6:59:00 AM

Hi Harris! I hope you could upload more of your writings. This is a nice poem by the way.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/6/2012 11:30:00 AM

Welcome to poetry Soup Harris, I look forward to reading many more of your fine writes. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2012 6:13:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Harris. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/28/2012 2:03:00 AM

Harris a big welcome to the soup, this is a very touching write, keep writing...David