Listen

just when i needed a time...
a warm hug to comfort my frail mind
to free my self from anguish..
frustration...
 
i..
 
hidden beyond the light of wisdom,
succumbs to aggravation
where journey to hope is rejected
hinders thy first steps...
 
i...
 
need soft winds to whisper my citations...
just a minute console
should you turn and listen
even for just a second...
 
i....
 
whimpers inside without tears..
 
i cant see anything
 
please...
 
just...
 
listen.....

depressionforgivenesslost loveballade

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Beata Agustin

December 18, 2024 at 9:11 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

March 23, 2016 at 12:39 PM

Harris, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

January 16, 2016 at 3:59 PM

Harris, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **

Scunder Dicychael

April 9, 2013 at 6:59 AM

Hi Harris! I hope you could upload more of your writings. This is a nice poem by the way.

Debbie Guzzi

December 6, 2012 at 11:30 AM

Welcome to poetry Soup Harris, I look forward to reading many more of your fine writes. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 29, 2012 at 6:13 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Harris. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol