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When Lonely And Silence Embrace.....It's Gonna Be A Long Night!

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My self inflected sorrow
Begins the countdown to tomorrow
Sorting through the maze of yesterday
Moments last forever
They torture at their pleasure
Making sure my heart has hell to pay

The clock cuts like a dull knife
As it ushers in the midnight
Breaking through the silence of the wall
I have just one obsession
'To offer my confession
The fact that no one's here is all my fault

I need someone to listen me to sleep
As I talk about the promises..... I didn't keep
One who'd love me.. if I'd let her
But she couldn't make it better
I need someone to listen....me to sleep

Someone who'd dare to listen....me to sleep

Colab With Carol M.
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Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:12 PM
what a very interesting phrase: listen me to sleep. Love that!
Melugin Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Thanks, Andrea! So appreciate that!
Hamilton Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Nice song Chuck, enjoyed the rhyme scheme, I can picture the melody in my head that's a good thing!
Melugin Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 5:04 AM
Thanks so much John! That means a lot to me,,,,coming from a songwriter! May you have success, doing what you love!
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 11:53 AM
I hear the tune of this melancholy song..quite well written.
Melugin Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 5:01 AM
Heartfelt thanks VJ, for your kindness and support!
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