Notes About The Poem
Graphic by Jon Corelis
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a naked star pinned to the tunic of night
an acid tear etching your face
a lilac wafer
a moon split open revealing the seeds and pulp
an eyelash a nightingale’s wing
a taste of frost
a button made of candy
a heart full of smoke
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Please note that I never have used and never will use AI to compose or revise any of my writings.
A random comment on poetry in general: What a poem means is not what it says, but how it says it.
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