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Liquid Poison

The more I think about the past The more shadowy flashy images come up to the surface The more I try to figure out what the images The more I get confused and irate the feelings get The more I ignore the negative hostility energy The more it gets worse The more it tries to boil up to the top The more the croak stopper quivers The more it becomes distressed over time Until the point it unwilling shoots out of the top Now the toxic venom start to well up Starts the cascading surge over the smooth lip Oozing and slithering down the silver-tongued facade Not wanting to let this unruly and riotous Venomous poison that turns into violent tendencies Once this flesh eating liquid poison reaches the edge The more I try to stop this from happening The more it claws and tries to hack open the steel door The door that imprisons this frustration and violence won’t last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/22/2013 6:03:00 PM
HI AMBER , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA
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