Larry Belt Poet Etheree

Liquid Pain

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Liquid Pain
A broken heart
Shattered to pieces
Will bleed tears of sorrow
Dripping pieces of our souls
Memories running down our face
Broken promises have turned to lies
Wiped away with the sleeves of rejection

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Jessica Bowie June 21, 2010 at 2:27 AM very visual.loved it

Amy Green June 19, 2010 at 8:46 AM Go Larry! This is awesome!

Sara Kendrick June 19, 2010 at 4:10 AM I can feel the pain..Excellent work..Sara

Sharon Tideswell June 19, 2010 at 3:50 AM A well written etheree on those tears of pain ~ good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)

Caryl Muzzey June 18, 2010 at 6:17 PM A very nice write and written well. Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Ralph Taylor June 18, 2010 at 2:22 PM Good job (I think). Etheree is another I don't get. I'm pretty much Rhyme or Limerick guy. Otherwise I'm lost - my shortcomings. However, I'm gonna plod along with my limited ability. Take care, Ralph.

Susan Mills June 18, 2010 at 10:43 AM Hi Larry! I like how you put your poem int a stair stepping shape (or triangle shape). That's cool! You captured a crying broken heart so well. Thank you for your comment on my poem! Love, Susan