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Liquid Little Stones

liquid little stones
skipping and skittering free
on shared umbrellas

natureseasonshaiku

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Valerie Staton

January 25, 2019 at 8:42 AM

Very nicely written!

Harpreet Kaur

January 28, 2016 at 9:14 AM

My appreciation for this Haiku is too deep for words. Congratulations Rickie!

Kate Sparks

November 12, 2015 at 9:23 AM

I hear the raindrops!

Norman Crocker

July 18, 2015 at 3:33 PM

Interesting thoughts.

Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 1:22 PM

RICKIE, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Michael Jordan

December 18, 2008 at 3:51 PM

Rickie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

Sue Mason

December 17, 2008 at 11:44 AM

This is just the most awesome write I've seen about rain!! At first I was imaging lily pads as the "umbrellas" and then I realized you weren't talking about throwing pebbles into the water ... LOL ... what a great write and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week!! Congratulations. Hope you have a wonderful holiday and '09 is great for you!!