Liquid Ice

For so long I’ve tread this water
Every once in a while
As I think of what I’m not
A cold current drags me under
Freezing my lungs
Every once in a while 
As I think of your love
Warm currents push me up
Far above these crashing waves
But as this gentle sea turns to the sea of reality 
And warm currents disappear 
This water turns to liquid ice
Rushing down my throat
Filling up my lungs
Pulling me down
Deeper and darker
Till the surface disappears
And not even your love can bring me back up
As I’m doomed to sink
My entire body suffers shock
And there’s nothing left to shake me alive 
My limbs too tired to move against these waves
Every push, every stroke brings no change
The sting of this liquid, frozen harshness 
Will hopefully someday turn these dead arms numb
I close my eyes, embrace the cold
And I don’t even realize
I’ve stopped swimming
I’m descending
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 21, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Just when the world (water) seems cold, Tayler, spring comes round to warm us. Please don't "stop swimming." You have too much talent to share! Love, Carolyn
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February 6, 2009 at 7:33 PM
wow! I found myself holding my breath a bit, wishing and hoping for the person in this poem! ... 'take a breath!' I wanted to cry out, life will be okay, hang in there! Swim! Hugs you dear one. Well done write here! ;)
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