Liquid Beads

Fresh drops of moisture,
Adorns the morning surface;
Embellished gardens.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 24, 2009 at 8:19 AM
Oh this is a fave. Beautiful.
Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:14 AM
And these haiku have formed their own garden here ... quite a delight. Love, my brother
Guzzi Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:49 PM
dew tell? ;) Light & Love
Bird Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 9:00 PM
Awesome Title! and so much creative images in this Haiku!
Leccese Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 8:48 PM
Knock-Knock you have soup mail
Lopez Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:17 PM
Nice work, I like the way you look at nature.
Gorelick Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 5:49 PM
You are SO good at this form..you really put the reader in the moment. BG
Moreno Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Beautiful title, your haikus are like pictures.
Winter Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:39 PM
I'm looking at a photograph. Love how you leave much of this to our own imagination. So lovely. Love, Shar
Chircop Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 3:11 PM
beautiful Haiku,Master of HAIKU you are and friend too:-)charma
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May 19, 2009 at 2:54 PM
The title intrigued me when I saw it. Nice use of imagery. You may want to change moister to moisture. Peaceful scene. I enjoyed it. Karen
Hensley Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 2:16 PM
I like the when i wake up and smell the morning dew from the morning! This is a great poem!
Megens Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:59 PM
id love to wake up to that every morning
Neal Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:50 PM
Gorgeous morning scene.
Higgins Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Good writing my brother.
Leccese Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Beautiful! This is the perfect morning picture! Nate
Mckenzie Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Wonderful reflection of nature in the morning! Laura :)
Bilyeu Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:01 PM
lovely!!! i love the middle line!!!
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