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Liquid Beads

Fresh drops of moisture, Adorns the morning surface; Embellished gardens.

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Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/24/2009 8:19:00 AM

Oh this is a fave. Beautiful.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:14:00 AM

And these haiku have formed their own garden here ... quite a delight. Love, my brother

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/20/2009 4:49:00 PM

dew tell? ;) Light & Love

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/19/2009 9:00:00 PM

Awesome Title! and so much creative images in this Haiku!

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/19/2009 8:48:00 PM

Knock-Knock you have soup mail

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/19/2009 7:17:00 PM

Nice work, I like the way you look at nature.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/19/2009 5:49:00 PM

You are SO good at this form..you really put the reader in the moment. BG

Danielle Moreno

Date: 5/19/2009 4:50:00 PM

Beautiful title, your haikus are like pictures.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 4:39:00 PM

I'm looking at a photograph. Love how you leave much of this to our own imagination. So lovely. Love, Shar

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2009 3:11:00 PM

beautiful Haiku,Master of HAIKU you are and friend too:-)charma

Date: 5/19/2009 2:54:00 PM

The title intrigued me when I saw it. Nice use of imagery. You may want to change moister to moisture. Peaceful scene. I enjoyed it. Karen

Justin Hensley

Date: 5/19/2009 2:16:00 PM

I like the when i wake up and smell the morning dew from the morning! This is a great poem!

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/19/2009 1:59:00 PM

id love to wake up to that every morning

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/19/2009 1:50:00 PM

Gorgeous morning scene.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/19/2009 1:35:00 PM

Good writing my brother.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/19/2009 1:18:00 PM

Beautiful! This is the perfect morning picture! Nate

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/19/2009 1:13:00 PM

Wonderful reflection of nature in the morning! Laura :)

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 5/19/2009 1:01:00 PM

lovely!!! i love the middle line!!!