Notes About The Poem

On the radio, this morning, a husband told a story of how his wife lingered too long on a kiss in church. He was embarrassed and had to sit for a moment.  A husband behind him gave him a thumbs up. 

 

Lip Service

LIP SERVICE

parishioner’s lips
misbehaving in church kiss ~
wife’s peace offering

11/5/2017
senryu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 3:04 PM
A really good write, Kim, and an excellent title to go with it, too! I believe the husband was left out of breath:) Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
Williams Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 6:57 AM
One happy guy by the sound of it Kim. He had to tell the world about it on air. Giggle!!...Maria xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 9:23 AM
He sure did! He was embarrassed but everyone else loved the kiss!
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 8:15 AM
- That was good, Kim :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Giggle! xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Maureen xx
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 7:34 AM
ooh err are folks going to have to ration their passion now Kim lol:-) what a great story:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Jan xx
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