Lip Service

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On the radio, this morning, a husband told a story of how his wife lingered too long on a kiss in church. He was embarrassed and had to sit for a moment. A husband behind him gave him a thumbs up.

LIP SERVICE parishioner’s lips misbehaving in church kiss ~ wife’s peace offering 11/5/2017 senryu

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2017 3:04:00 PM

A really good write, Kim, and an excellent title to go with it, too! I believe the husband was left out of breath:) Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 6:24:00 PM

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!

Maria Williams

Date: 11/7/2017 6:57:00 AM

One happy guy by the sound of it Kim. He had to tell the world about it on air. Giggle!!...Maria xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2017 9:23:00 AM

He sure did! He was embarrassed but everyone else loved the kiss!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2017 8:15:00 AM

- That was good, Kim :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/6/2017 7:46:00 AM

Giggle! xomo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Maureen xx

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2017 7:34:00 AM

ooh err are folks going to have to ration their passion now Kim lol:-) what a great story:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2017 11:52:00 AM

Thank you Jan xx