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Lioness

Lavished Lioness 
Lunges with quietness
Leaks love, inspired with...
Hunger
It aches her when in slumber
It takes her under
Straddling starvation
now just preying on prayers
stuck in a safari of slayers
The hectic hunt continues
Various emptiness in the same venue
Deadlands. Dead things
Then she sees a man.
Lavished Lioness
Lunges with Quietness
sinks her teeth inspired with
Fresh Meat.

Copyright © B. Maxine Revolution | Year Posted 2014

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Brittany Larson Date: 8/12/2014 1:58:00 AM Very good. What a talent you have! Login to Reply

Rory Hannan Date: 2/15/2014 8:23:00 PM Loving the preying on prayers! Beautiful poem x Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 2/14/2014 7:59:00 AM I send you warm applause for your featured poem; it is really wonderful! I can see the real emotions and environment around the lioness. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 2/11/2014 8:55:00 PM B M., , congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page:-) ~ Loving ~ SKAT Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 2/1/2014 4:29:00 PM welcome to the soup this lioness gave me the chills. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/28/2014 3:46:00 PM Britney, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifing Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/5/2014 12:42:00 AM Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Britney Login to Reply B. Maxine Revolution Date: 1/5/2014 3:32:00 AM Thank you very much, I'm flattered!

Skat A Date: 1/4/2014 6:52:00 PM oOo, this is awesome Britney, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply B. Maxine Revolution Date: 1/5/2014 3:36:00 AM Very sweet of you. :) Thank you for reading.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/4/2014 6:49:00 AM - Welcome to P-Soup, Britney ! - A very good poem.....majestic animals !! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Joe Smith Date: 1/4/2014 12:12:00 AM The way you captured the hunger of the lioness was remarkable! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/3/2014 10:43:00 PM My third favorite form -Alliteration- One day I wish to write an awesome alliteration poem like the one above Britney, refreshing the meat. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply