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Lioness

Lavished Lioness 
Lunges with quietness
Leaks love, inspired with...
Hunger
It aches her when in slumber
It takes her under
Straddling starvation
now just preying on prayers
stuck in a safari of slayers
The hectic hunt continues
Various emptiness in the same venue
Deadlands. Dead things
Then she sees a man.
Lavished Lioness
Lunges with Quietness
sinks her teeth inspired with
Fresh Meat.

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Brittany Larson

August 12, 2014 at 1:58 AM

Very good. What a talent you have!

Rory Hannan

February 15, 2014 at 8:23 PM

Loving the preying on prayers! Beautiful poem x

Teddy Kimathi

February 14, 2014 at 7:59 AM

I send you warm applause for your featured poem; it is really wonderful! I can see the real emotions and environment around the lioness.

Skat A

February 11, 2014 at 8:55 PM

B M., , congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page:-) ~ Loving ~ SKAT

John Loving Iii

February 1, 2014 at 4:29 PM

welcome to the soup this lioness gave me the chills.

Skat A

January 28, 2014 at 3:46 PM

Britney, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifing Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 5, 2014 at 12:42 AM

Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Britney

B. Maxine Revolution

January 5, 2014 at 3:32 AM

Thank you very much, I'm flattered!

Skat A

January 4, 2014 at 6:52 PM

oOo, this is awesome Britney, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

B. Maxine Revolution

January 5, 2014 at 3:36 AM

Very sweet of you. :) Thank you for reading.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 4, 2014 at 6:49 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Britney ! - A very good poem.....majestic animals !! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Smith

January 4, 2014 at 12:12 AM

The way you captured the hunger of the lioness was remarkable!

Poet Destroyer A

January 3, 2014 at 10:43 PM

My third favorite form -Alliteration- One day I wish to write an awesome alliteration poem like the one above Britney, refreshing the meat. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

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