Lion

Laying under tree
Mane flowing teeth bearing grin
King of the jungle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 2:38 PM
Regal Haiku for the King of Beasts>>James
Goff Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 7:44 PM
love this haiku! James!...jmg
Arteaga Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 12:08 AM
but the king is rather lazy the queen does most of the work :P nice haiku for a great animal
Chircop Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 11:01 PM
this lion scared me with his bearing grin--great description of the king--charma
Mckenzie Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 5:44 PM
Different subject matter I like it! well done! Laura :0)
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 4:19 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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