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A photo taken spontaneously in travel one day where I live.

Lining of Hope

No brighter white could shine
From the sun on the clouds
Rising above the tallest trees
Layers of soft formations
Spread as far as one sees

I thought I saw an angel
Flying above, softly painting
Pure white lining of hope
On the sky upon some gray
In the magnificent view this day

Heidi Sands
6/24/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 6/26/2017 3:04:00 AM
Love the line, Pure white lining of Hope, how beautiful Heidi. I really enjoyed this ...Maria
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thank you very much , Maria :)
Date: 6/25/2017 3:44:00 PM
Beautiful words to go with the picture <3 This is a wonderful, happy poem, Heidi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2017 3:54:00 PM
Thank you for the uplifting comment Sara :)
Date: 6/25/2017 12:15:00 PM
inspiring me with etches of hope... remarkable work, heidi..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2017 2:01:00 PM
Happy to hear you are inspired Nette! Thank you for your kind comment on this :)
Date: 6/24/2017 4:56:00 PM
Another gorgeous canvas of beauty painted by your words, Heidi. You are in some serious spiritual zone right now w/your poetry. It is a beautiful place to be ... I know, believe me I know. Lovely poem, dear. Love and hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Freddie. I love to share the beauty I see, if I can. I appreciate your comment, always. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 6/24/2017 4:32:00 PM
Hello Heidi, A marvelous word picture for sure here with "Lining of hope." The angels are indeed always with us. A very inspiring free verse. Enjoyed it immensely. Best Weekend Wishes, Gary
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Gary. Have a nice weekend :)
Date: 6/24/2017 3:58:00 PM
love the imagery, Heidi, to see angels in the formation of clouds hiding to keep watch over us... ~*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Eve :) I am happy you like this.
Date: 6/24/2017 11:52:00 AM
This is a pretty poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Dale :)
Date: 6/24/2017 11:46:00 AM
Beautiful...I can picture them floating by
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Tim :)
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