Lining of Hope

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A photo taken spontaneously in travel one day where I live.

No brighter white could shine From the sun on the clouds Rising above the tallest trees Layers of soft formations Spread as far as one sees I thought I saw an angel Flying above, softly painting Pure white lining of hope On the sky upon some gray In the magnificent view this day Heidi Sands 6/24/17

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Maria Williams

Date: 6/26/2017 3:04:00 AM

Love the line, Pure white lining of Hope, how beautiful Heidi. I really enjoyed this ...Maria

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/26/2017 7:06:00 AM

Thank you very much , Maria :)

Sara Ella

Date: 6/25/2017 3:44:00 PM

Beautiful words to go with the picture <3 This is a wonderful, happy poem, Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2017 3:54:00 PM

Thank you for the uplifting comment Sara :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2017 12:15:00 PM

inspiring me with etches of hope... remarkable work, heidi..huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2017 2:01:00 PM

Happy to hear you are inspired Nette! Thank you for your kind comment on this :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/24/2017 4:56:00 PM

Another gorgeous canvas of beauty painted by your words, Heidi. You are in some serious spiritual zone right now w/your poetry. It is a beautiful place to be ... I know, believe me I know. Lovely poem, dear. Love and hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 5:51:00 PM

Thank you Freddie. I love to share the beauty I see, if I can. I appreciate your comment, always. Have a great weekend :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/24/2017 4:32:00 PM

Hello Heidi, A marvelous word picture for sure here with "Lining of hope." The angels are indeed always with us. A very inspiring free verse. Enjoyed it immensely. Best Weekend Wishes, Gary

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2017 5:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Gary. Have a nice weekend :)