Lingering Warmth Triolet

Warmth lingered through the final days As eternity tried to reign Over my Dad’s triumphant gaze… Warmth lingered through the final days While he declared God’s wondrous ways Smiting infirmity-caused pain… Warmth lingered through the final days As eternity tried to reign*.
*Revelation 1:8 I am Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the ending, saith the Lord, which is, and which was, and which is to come, the Almighty. June 24, 2026 1st place, "A TRIOLET TO MAKE MY DAY" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich; judged on 7/1/2026
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Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 11:45 AM
Beata, how could a heart not be touched by your beautiful tribute to your father? Congratulations! Sending you blessings of comfort.
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:23 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness so comforting.
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. Quite a different approach to the contest but great that you remembered your father. Sara K.
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:24 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 6:09 AM
A bittersweet remembrance! Congrats, Beata!
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:25 PM
Thanks. God bless you. Likewise, thanks for your uplifting comments.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 12:29 AM
A beautiful title to go with a bittersweet story of your dad's final days. Well done and congratulations in my contest, Beata
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:26 PM
Thanks. God bless you. Thanks likewise for sponsoring this contest.
Kapoor Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 7:14 PM
Nice poem on the warmth of life and love for the God? Thanks df for visiting my poem? With best wishes Ravindra K Kapoor
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:26 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His warm lovingkindness.
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