Lines of Separation

During the Civil War, the Mason Dixon Line 
Divided North from South, separating families
In 1961 guard towers were erected
On the Berlin Wall, separation strategies

Although the Berlin Wall was finally torn down
The Great Wall of China remains a monument
Created to protect the Chinese Empire
Keep out nomad invaders with a firm armament

Now a line spans the aisle of the US Congress
They’re seated to the right or left, never centered
And if a brave independent tries to speak out
Be assured this courageous soul will be censored

Lines are used to separate wholes into sections
What mankind needs is more unification now
Segregation is wrong, regardless of intent
To those who seek to eradicate “lines,” I bow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:22 AM
wonderful my friend
K. Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Wonderful and meaningful take on the challenge, Carolyn! Congrats on your win! -- nikko :)
Smalling Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:08 PM
The army marches with you and I carry the flag. Bravo!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Carolyn, I was so happy to see this poem in the winner's circle. I knew it has winner written on it. Congratulations! Love, Connie
Kapoor Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Great beauty lies in this thought provoking lines. I do agree with you to eradicate all such lines, which divide us from that dot which is the ultimate goal of every one. Congratulations on your well deserving win. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra...Carolyn Devonshire
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Paula Swanson's contest "Line". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 12:29 AM
I take it you won!! Well deserved win! Luv, Andreas
Gorelick Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 9:42 PM
LNC..congrats to you..you are just so good at this sind of poetry..got you message..Ill call soon..BG
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 9:32 PM
beautifully said Carolyn, congrats on your win in the contest
Mannan Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 9:01 PM
What a lovely depiction of line. Loved the end. Many congratulations dear friend for this win.
Guzzi Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 8:00 PM
a strong moral voice, GO ladies! the world needs more of us. Congrad's Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Great political statement in the form of poetry.Congratulations on your win....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carolyn
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Carolyn, This is excellent and I totally agree with your last stanza here. This is sure to do well in the contest. I wanted to let you know that I don't mess with Facebook after getting a virus from there on my desk top. I only keep it so I can see photos of friends. Aloha, Connie
Brown Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 10:27 AM
It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Carolyn. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Yes! Eradicate lines, but do something about the flow over our boarders. California is a mess. I dig your third stanza. Love, Dave
Wellington Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 7:41 AM
I totally agree with you on this, oneness is unity. This will also be in my Favs. Thanks for your kind remarks on "ANTICIPATION". Luv, Joy (Jew)
Knop Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Hi Carolyn! This goes to my Favs! Segregation is the cause of much evil!...So well written!...Love, Gert
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Carolyn, I am really liking your poetry tonight. Another amazing poem. This line contest is getting some dang good entries!! Luv, Andrea
Horsman Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 9:24 PM
Hi Carolyn, love this you are so right, one point though, if we had unification, society would probably throw a line around it, and in doing so, create exactly what we have now. thank you for your comments on my work. Harry
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September 22, 2010 at 7:23 PM
Remember the Berlin WAll finally came down. It was unnatural. So is our current divided country. It will either be reconciled by public demand or by civil war. I ferar the former. I dread the latter, LOve, to Donna from Gerard.
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September 22, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Oh, my God! Carolyn, you are so right and this is so well written. I totally agree with this. We do need more unification. This world is still filled with walls, as we, humans, can find these also within ourselves. Thanks for sharing. soupmail! Caroline.
Haick Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Just had to stop for a moment to recognize this perceptive write, Carolyn..A darn good entry for Paula's "Line" Contest! Educational and informative. Thanks for sharing. Wishing you good luck and thanking you for the HM placement of my "Timeless Replica"! Got to run but I should be back later... Love, Audrey
Stallworth Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Hi Carolyn, Thanks for your kind words. I can relate to feeling unloved at times, but I do know that GOD loves me no matter and I feel everyone should feel that way. Hope you are having a blessed day. Take care
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September 22, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Good luck Carolyn, feel like maybe I should do mine over after reading this....Love Michael
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