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The lines of a poem often slow, yet fast; the lines of a poem bring back memories past; the lines of a poem so delicate and light; the lines of a poem bring lovers sheer delight; the lines of a poem with both wax and wane; the lines of a poem to the poet - are perfectly sane. Poems are meant to be read, but imaginations are meant to be fed. For "A Poem From Thee" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Date: 12/14/2011 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing George. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2011 12:24:00 AM
Wonderful! The last line wraps it up in style.
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:36:00 PM
Excellent my friend. And if we pay attention to what we reqad our imaginaion soars. Good job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/12/2011 3:26:00 PM
simply put and beautifully written George.. more romantic than a card from the Hallmark rack luv.. sensitive and meaningful.. luv the lovers line ..
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Date: 7/8/2011 3:20:00 PM
Creative work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/6/2011 9:28:00 PM
very true...congratulations on your win.always Juanita.
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:41:00 PM
So true George, congratulations on your win with this beauty ;)
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:28:00 PM
cheery congrats on your special win, dear carol :) huggs!
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations George for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:56:00 PM
* GEORGE!* * SO touched*-- whew, my fingers!
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:55:00 PM
a stirring, delightful piece, feorge... got more?? thanks for your congrats ; i didn;t know my work was featured till you mentioned it.. do touched! :) hugggs,nette
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:53:00 AM
What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul George. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 9:33:00 AM
Very nice piece of work you have here.
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