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assorted like the washing on its lines the words appeared along my way in bunches of neat paragraphs they briskly flapped into my mind still dripping with those concepts they must have been soaked in for a while I gladly felt them touching me and liked their affluent display of shapes and textures manifold enjoyed the pleasant freshness of the smell they carried off all seasons’ winds spiced with ideas time passing by would watch me stealthily try on this one or that so in their context rinsed with thought to cool the feverish qualms of my keen heart and growingly my soul seems to be draped in purified attire

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Date: 12/20/2008 11:55:00 PM
Ingrid, Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Lines" being Featured this week Merry Christmas and may the New Year Bring YOU and YOURS Health and Prosperity...HG
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:40:00 PM
Ingrid - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/16/2008 8:13:00 PM
Hi Ingrid, Congratulations on your feature of the week. lainie
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Date: 12/16/2008 5:53:00 AM
This is thought provoking introspection, which, for me, is one of the main things poetry is all about....the great feeling of bringing something to light, the bold feeling of fulfillment. Congrats on this fine selection.
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ingrid. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2008 5:26:00 PM
What a creative view. I enjoyed this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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