Linear Peace

Within the pages white as snow
and between the lines as black as coal,
to all the places You have sowed,
Oh Lord, let me abide within the line.

Within the turning page we see.
Alight, aflame in harmony.
And friends or foes do go in mystery.
Oh Lord, let me abide within the line.

Let me alight in peace with Thee and Poe,
with Kipling’s tales in Just So
with Moses staff and Joseph’s sign
Oh Lord, let me abide within the line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 9:21 AM
This one is quite unique, Deb. A kyrielle too. I like you writing in forms like this. Love how you kept reworking Moonbow till you made it metered. glad you liked This Night. Did you know Shakespere did all his sonnets like that, with no breaks? Many of today's sonnets, I've seen done that way! I often break mine but once in a while leave them with no breaks. Depends on the topic. Well,it was enjoyable reading all your lovely poems and now I gotta get to typing up my new one. LUv, Andrea
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 6:35 AM
PERFECTION! Love it. I makes me almost want to rework my first Iambic Pentameters...almost. SMILES. This is beautiful. Great content and I like the kirelle form, too.
Scripca Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 1:25 AM
Thank you for your comment on my blog "Humor in Poetry"
Strand Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 1:16 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 4:36 PM
TWO SOUP MAILS...
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Oh, I think it is a kyrielle, like Jared said!! Yes, that is a lovely type of poem to be doing, and gosh, Deb. what were you saying to me just now when you commented on thundering falls?? What do i need to rush. I have ten days on that one contest of yours, don't I? LUv, andrea
Pickett Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Good form... I like the Kyrielle... Have you tried the Kyrielle Sonnett?? Good work my friend.....:JP]
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