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Line Up For Santa

At the shopping mall There are bright colours everywhere Santa's seat in view Ready for the long line up For sitting on Santa's lap

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Heidi Sands

Date: 12/8/2017 6:43:00 PM

Nice holiday Tanka. I enjoyed this :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/4/2017 6:48:00 PM

Such a beautiful and well-crafted tanka my dear friend. Looking forward for a colorful Christmas with Santa's great surprise. All the best always. love lots and hugs, Leonora

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2017 8:12:00 PM

Hello Leonora, thank you I am looking forward to Christmas. My nephews will be with me to celebrate.Are you looking forward to Christmas? Have a nice evening my friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/28/2017 9:41:00 PM

Moving description of a scene I love, Darlene. Janice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/29/2017 8:17:00 AM

Hello Janice nice to meet you. Thank you. I saw thi at the shopping mall. The children are so cute. Have a nice day my friend.

Mick Talbot

Date: 11/23/2017 12:08:00 PM

Certainly evokes a memory or two of when my kids were youngsters. Thanks Darlene! Seasons greetings to you and your kin! Mick

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2017 3:03:00 PM

Hello Mick,I am so pleased this poem brought you a memory. As I wrote this poem I also got a flash back of myself. I hope you had a good Thanksgiving celebration. Have a nice evening my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/23/2017 3:19:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2017 7:06:00 AM

Hello Ravi, thank you.The children are starting to line up for Santa at the shopping mall now. It is so cute to watch. Have a nice day my friend.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/22/2017 7:04:00 PM

Nice to meet you too, Darlene! brings memories, thank you!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/22/2017 7:47:00 PM

It also brings memories tome as well James.I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving day. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/19/2017 8:24:00 PM

I'm standing in line every day 360 days a year... Christmas is extra...All the best to you Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2017 7:27:00 AM

Hello Micheal, all the best to you as well my friend. There are long line ups at every shopping mall I go. These children are so cute dressed up to see Santa. Have annice day my friend.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/19/2017 7:26:00 PM

Always makes me smile when I see all the kids so excited like that, great write!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2017 7:29:00 AM

I also like to see the children in a line upto see Santa. They are all execited. Thank you my friend. Have a niceday.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 11/19/2017 2:42:00 PM

Used to love taking my children to see Santa. One year my dad dressed up as Santa and none of his five grandchildren noticed, although my son said "Santa had a watch like Papa."

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2017 7:34:00 AM

You and your children have a good memory of tha Christmas tha passed. Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/19/2017 2:29:00 PM

What a lovely descriptive seasonal tanka Darlene:-) It makes me smile we tell children not to talk to strangers then encourage them to sit on Santa's knee lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2017 7:43:00 AM

I am so pleased that this poem makes you smile. have a nice day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 11/19/2017 2:07:00 PM

I've done that as a boy. I told Santa what I wanted for Christmas. It was all part of my Christmas.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2017 7:46:00 AM

Hello Alfred, as a child I remember sitting on Santa's knee. The rest of the memory is gone. I do like to watch the children sitting on his knee. Have a nice dy my friend.